literature

Trying So Hard

Deviation Actions

pichud's avatar
By
Published:
397 Views

Literature Text

There was once a time I walked with God and did not feel his warm embrace
A time I walked and could not see the wonder of his Grace
I believed and waited, forever it seemed
Nothing happened, no light beamed

But when I stopped trying to see God,
See the wonders of his love
And let HIM come in and help me.
I soon found him saying, "I'm right next to thee.

I've been here a while, and been knocking at your door forever,
But you'd been trying so hard I figured you knew how better!"
Better than me how to work my Grace,
Better than me how it looked, my face!
But now you've come at last hither
Come and eat, let's have dinner!
This is a short little ditty I came up with inside of 15 minutes, and it describes the first few years of my walk with Christ. Yep, Christ. It talks about people who try to hard, (like me :P)
© 2011 - 2024 pichud
Comments5
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Davidpoet30's avatar
i like it is it brings tears to my eyes